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Offline Perturabo

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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #15 on: May 29, 2009, 12:32:53 AM »
Anyway we can bulk up the orc?
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #16 on: May 29, 2009, 12:37:48 AM »
he looks fine to me.  It's not suposed to be a warboss.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #17 on: May 29, 2009, 01:02:10 AM »
As fun as it might look, orks who ride on top of trains without seat belts don't grow up to be Warboss.

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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #18 on: May 29, 2009, 01:26:19 AM »
The orc in the concept I drew from was even smaller than the one I drew. ;P

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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #19 on: May 29, 2009, 03:53:13 PM »
You're a talented artist, Candy.   Good show!  :)

The train itself looks properly Orky.  Like the graffiti on the T sign.

I like the Grot just where he is.   Reminds me of the Forge World Grot Bomb.

I agree with Leland.  Maybe replace the "Next Stop: Central Square," which no one other than us is really going to get when we wear these things to tourneys outside Pandemonium, with the" Red Lines Go Fasta" bit, which pretty much any 40K player is going to immediately comprehend and most likely laugh at?

Not sure about the cowboy hat and Ork's clothing...that's a Doctor Strangelove reference, right?  I think it breaks the "Orkyness" a little bit.  I'd love to see a version where the Ork is dressed in fluffier Ork clothing to see if it looks funnier.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #20 on: May 29, 2009, 05:21:31 PM »
I'd second the notion of bulking up the Ork - warboss or not, Orks have massive upper bodies compared to human proportions.

All the same, I'll be psyched when we get our hands on these.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #21 on: May 29, 2009, 05:28:13 PM »
Also, if modifying the orc, you should exagerate his underbite, and push his nose up to between his eyes.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #22 on: May 29, 2009, 05:48:18 PM »
Yeah, I'd say

1) mod the ork, making him a little bulkier, with a few of the facial tweeks wyatt suggested.

2) The ork clothing was the strangelove reference I believe, maybe add some teeth to the hat crocodile-dundee-style to ork it up a bit, also maybe patch/tears in the clothing.

3) I might leave the "next stop central square" squawk box and add the "Red Ones Go FASTA!?" as a slogan beneath the image.

I'll post a picture of what i'm thinking momentarily.

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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #23 on: May 29, 2009, 06:06:10 PM »
I'm happy to do this but if I do this for you all again can you please finalize what you want on your initial image before? Because from what I got of the image that I drew this one from, everyone seemed happy about it and my image is almost exact and now all these changes want to be made all of the sudden. If this was a $300 dollar project like I'd normally charge I'd completely understand but it's not. Some of these tweaks will take some time that I'd normally charge more for, just so you all know how this whole commission thing work, and personally I think some of the tweaks you guys want to be make are super minor but at the same time would cause me to need to completely redraw a section of the image. I love you guys so damn much but help a girl out next time, alright?  :-*

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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #24 on: May 29, 2009, 06:13:52 PM »
Candy, don't make any changes to your drawing until we've debated somewhat. I'd like to get a formal set of changes to run by you to avoid you needing to revisit it several times. There's alot of us, so we can't make everyone happy.  Attached is my T-shirt "vision". So not much changes. Actually, other than the squawk box change, the other "red linz go fasta" could potentially be added by the T-shirt vendor rather than included in in your image.

I don't think anyone would be unhappy with the current image, so if no changes are made we should be fine with it.

The front logo was just something i was playing around with with Luis when he was brainstorming website designs, so can be kept or left. Its just a placeholder in the images.

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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #25 on: May 29, 2009, 06:17:36 PM »
Well the redlines go faster I can totally add at the bottom because that doesn't screw with the image but I think the other things are too minor to change really, not worth it. No need to be nit picky with a $20 dollars commission guys. XD

Anyhoo I can add the text at the bottom with no problems so jsut let me know. =)

Also, Josh, NICE setup.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #26 on: May 29, 2009, 06:19:21 PM »
Perfect Josh.  That's how I'm submitting it.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #27 on: May 29, 2009, 06:42:51 PM »
If we're just adding words at this point, can they at least be in the 'orky' font? Now I'm done.
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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #28 on: May 29, 2009, 08:41:58 PM »
Can we make it "Red ones go fasta?"   It's more pure Orky...


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Re: T-Shirt pic! LOOK!
« Reply #29 on: June 01, 2009, 11:09:48 PM »
The original design, which was approved by a club vote, read

Da Red Linez Go Fasta!!

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